I really love Kristen in Pinto fics (not enough of it since she left Heroes), and this was such a lovely characterisation of her. Also, the sex can get confusing sometimes in threesomes, but this was really well-written.

(You know, I honestly don't mean to sound like I'm commending you on choreography of all things, but my mind is kind of stuck on GUH HOT mode after reading this, so.) Thank you for writing this!! :)