1- Excellent! Showing and not telling is a struggle for most writers, and you definitely did it justice there! :-)

2- I could literally listen to "Sober" until my heart explodes from the pretty broken-ness!!
Oh yay "Maybe" fic!! :-D
OMG Please. I'll even write you something in exchange!
Well that certainly IS incentive! :-D I'll have to try my best then!