I would read a million more words of this for BBB, but if you feel like it ended in a good place and it doesn't need anymore that's totally valid too. (I stand that it's fine where it is, but more is ALWAYS better :D)

See, now I'm all intrigued about your Gabe, and wish to know about his more-than-money issues. Does he gamble for people's freedom? Or divert money to a rebellion? MUST. KNOW. SEKRIT. PLANS.

I like your rambley reply, and I'm glad you liked mine. I always think the more you enjoy a fic the more you should say about it. "this was great" is nice to read, but HERE ARE TWENTY REASONS WHY THIS FIC WINS AT LIFE is better. :D