Oh, okay, I'm going to have to read this again to catch nuance because right now my hands are shaking at just reading the broad strokes. This was amazing.
The way you used the song, the way you made Zach so infuriatingly distant in the beginning - self-preservation at its finest because he was overwhelmed by Chris'constant "there"ness - made his return all that much more larger than life. I loved how for all his "distance" from Chris, he still knew exactly what Chris was thinking, doing and feeling. I loved how he still loved Chris no matter how hard he tried not to. In short, I just loved this whole thing.
There is a 2b (or not 2b), right? I need another part so I can throw random, rambling comments at you...and lots of love and gratitude, too. :)
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The way you used the song, the way you made Zach so infuriatingly distant in the beginning - self-preservation at its finest because he was overwhelmed by Chris'constant "there"ness - made his return all that much more larger than life. I loved how for all his "distance" from Chris, he still knew exactly what Chris was thinking, doing and feeling. I loved how he still loved Chris no matter how hard he tried not to. In short, I just loved this whole thing.
There is a 2b (or not 2b), right? I need another part so I can throw random, rambling comments at you...and lots of love and gratitude, too. :)