I'm glad you think so. I sort of felt like Zach's feelings came across in this one, too. It kept fighting me, though, wanting to jump POV. I'll probably try it, but if it just comes across as the exact same thing in a different voice, I'm scrapping the idea.
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Date: 2009-08-09 01:13 am (UTC)I'm glad you think so. I sort of felt like Zach's feelings came across in this one, too. It kept fighting me, though, wanting to jump POV. I'll probably try it, but if it just comes across as the exact same thing in a different voice, I'm scrapping the idea.